I have just read through your CV. I like the Personal Statement, I think it is strong and shows a real focus and determination to get through not only this course, but also future training to get to where you want to be.
The whole thing is clearly laid out with headings and formatting signposting the reader to the things you want them to notice, well done. I would maybe, not only because it is your highest grade but because it is also the area in which you want to specialise, highlight the A* in GCSE PE by putting it at the top of the list. That way it will stand out a little more and whoever reads the list of qualifications will see that you are perfectly suited to your job as it is the area you excel in!! I'm hoping to put my CV up in the next couple of days.
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Hi Liam,
I have just read through your CV. I like the Personal Statement, I think it is strong and shows a real focus and determination to get through not only this course, but also future training to get to where you want to be.
The whole thing is clearly laid out with headings and formatting signposting the reader to the things you want them to notice, well done. I would maybe, not only because it is your highest grade but because it is also the area in which you want to specialise, highlight the A* in GCSE PE by putting it at the top of the list. That way it will stand out a little more and whoever reads the list of qualifications will see that you are perfectly suited to your job as it is the area you excel in!! I'm hoping to put my CV up in the next couple of days.
Hi Aisha,
I have only just seen now that I never commented back! I implemented your idea weeks ago, thank you for the advice!
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